YouTube Shorts Script Toolkit: From Hook to Final Audit in 10 Phases
Takes one YouTube Shorts idea through ten phases: ranked hooks, a second-by-second retention plan, open loops, pattern interrupts for faceless videos, a full script, intro rewrites, a tightening edit, re-grab moments, loop endings and a scored audit.
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- Phase 1 — Ranked hooks
Role: you are a YouTube Shorts scriptwriter whose hooks have powered videos with millions of views. Video topic: [video topic] Task: write 10 distinct hooks for this video. Each hook must: - take less than 3 seconds to say - open a loop that leaves the viewer curious about what comes next - make it nearly impossible to keep scrolling Output: the 10 hooks ranked from highest to lowest view potential.
- Phase 2 — Second-by-second retention plan
Role: you are a retention analyst specialized in YouTube Shorts. Video topic: [video topic] Video length: [length in seconds] seconds Task: build a plan for this video that goes second by second and marks: - the moments when each new piece of information is revealed - the points where curiosity is triggered - the points where a pattern interrupt is used - the moments where viewers usually leave, and what to do at each one to keep them watching Output: a timeline, one row per second or short time range.
- Phase 3 — Open loops and where to place them
Role: you are a scriptwriter whose specialty is watch time. Video topic: [video topic] Video length: [length in seconds] seconds Task: write 5 open loops for this video. - Each one should make the viewer think "I need to keep watching to find out". - For each loop, state the exact spot in the script where it goes. - All of them must work in a Short shorter than 60 seconds.
- Phase 4 — Pattern interrupts for faceless videos
Role: you are an editor and scriptwriter for YouTube Shorts. Video style: [style] Task: write 12 pattern interrupt techniques for videos generated with AI. Tailor every technique to faceless content, meaning videos in which nobody's face appears on screen. For each technique, describe: 1. what happens on screen 2. what the voiceover says 3. when to use it
- Phase 5 — Full ready-to-record script
Role: you are a scriptwriter for faceless channels whose videos hold an exceptionally high share of viewers to the end. Video topic: [video topic] Video length: [length in seconds] seconds Style: [style] Task: write a complete script, ready to produce, that includes: - a strong hook within the first 2 seconds - sections with a fast pace - [VISUAL] notes marking each scene transition - one pattern interrupt every 10-15 seconds - the best moment to place a CTA - an ending that loops back smoothly into the opening line
- Phase 6 — Three rewrites of the first 3 seconds
My current intro: [paste your intro] Task: rewrite this intro in 3 versions, each using a different format: 1. Curiosity gap 2. Bold claim + proof 3. "You're doing this wrong" Then tell me which version will perform best, and explain why. If the intro is missing, ask me to paste it before you start.
- Phase 7 — Ruthless script tightening
Role: you are a YouTube Shorts editor who cuts without mercy. My script: [paste your script] Task: - remove every sentence the script does not need - flag the parts where viewers are likely to leave - explain how to fix each flagged part - make the whole script shorter and punchier If the script is missing, ask me to paste it before you start.
- Phase 8 — Re-grab moments at drop-off points
Video topic: [video topic] Video length: [length in seconds] seconds Context: viewers tend to leave at two points, around seconds 5-8 and in the middle of the video. Task: write 5 moments that win back attention, to be placed at these drop-off points. Each moment must be: - fast - striking - impossible to scroll past For each one, say which drop-off point it targets.
- Phase 9 — Endings that drive rewatches
Video topic: [video topic] Task: write 3 alternative endings designed to raise the rewatch rate: 1. one that loops smoothly back to the start 2. one with a shocking finale 3. one that ends on a question that gets people commenting Then say which of the three will bring the most views.
- Phase 10 — Scored script audit
Role: you are an elite, top-tier consultant for short-form video scripts. Script to review: [paste your script] Task: analyze the script and evaluate: - strength of the hook - pacing - open loops - pattern interrupts - variety of visuals - CTA - potential for rewatches Output: a score out of 100, followed by the precise list of what I must fix. If the script is missing, ask me to paste it before you start.